Very nice
Very nice
Thank you!
hey man great animation, I'm in a punk/metal/rock band of my own called Unemploid and I'm also working on an animation series BWBY. Great to see that there's musicians that are also interested in animation. I'll be sure to sub to your youtube.
Dude, thanks a million; Turns out people like us aren't alone!
I would rate higher but you video is not in english, very neat idea though
Thank you very much for your comment! ^^ You're right i will translate it in english. Cheers!
The audio and accents can be hard for me but I'm a sucker for dedicated series apparently. action and animation seems intense, looking forward for more content.
Hai. Thanks a lot.
Was the background music too loud that it over Shadowed the characters voices?
The accent I'll try hard to work on and also provide subtitles in my next episode.
Thanks for the input. 😊
very newgrounds
Thanks I am now one of your fans.
Very great short series, I wouldn't believe something like this would be on new grounds ten years ago lol. Some of the voice acting can be robotic and the animation could be more fluid. Do you have a theatre background because how many arm posses the characters do really suggest that. Having less arm movement while talking can make a noticeable difference. Also I like the main character's motivation and has me invested in what's to come next.
no theatre background, just used video reference of the scene being acted out.
Think the acting could have been toned down too... Glad it's got you intrigued!
sorry but needs a lot of work. If he got hit with the ball I couldn't tell. Also, the very first thing they teach you in animation is how to bounce a ball and this was just sloppy. Keep trying.
Thank you! Yes, I know this animation isn't the best but still it's my first one! The sloppy ball was from a tutorial I watched in EpicFaceFists channel.
good try. I really like that you added voices but the text speed may be a bit too fast. Also you need to edit those web faces better.
Good advice, sir. I might consider remaking this, along with a few of my other older videos. Thanks. :D
I gave you three stars only because I don't understand anything they're saying. My suggestion is to add english subtitles... Look incredibly good though.
The english subtitles is available on youtube :https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=3EpqC9iDEdg
Enjoy !
Brenton and Brandon Bolderoff, twin brother, guitarist and bassist of Unemploid, Skateboard enthusiast, Cartoon writers and animators, and gamers. Basically anything that isn't a real job...
Age 32, Male
Unemploid Guitarist
El Monte, CA
Joined on 11/1/14