sorry but needs a lot of work. If he got hit with the ball I couldn't tell. Also, the very first thing they teach you in animation is how to bounce a ball and this was just sloppy. Keep trying.
Thank you! Yes, I know this animation isn't the best but still it's my first one! The sloppy ball was from a tutorial I watched in EpicFaceFists channel.
good try. I really like that you added voices but the text speed may be a bit too fast. Also you need to edit those web faces better.
Good advice, sir. I might consider remaking this, along with a few of my other older videos. Thanks. :D
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